Fireworks - Revision history

Alpengeist: Added "Description" header

2021-06-10T02:09:39Z

Added "Description" header

2019-02-01T07:04:19Z

Grammar, wording adjustments

2018-06-06T02:38:12Z

Edited gift note to reflect that other gifts were also given

2018-06-06T02:18:06Z

Spelling mistakes

2018-06-06T01:53:06Z

Added note regarding 12th anniversary giveaway

2015-06-10T10:20:30Z

Removed woodtype in line with guidelines.

2015-06-10T10:15:46Z

removed video link as it's no longer available

2015-06-10T10:11:06Z

populated with more links

2015-06-09T23:23:16Z

Gift update

2015-06-03T21:13:38Z

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 __NOTOC__[[CDB|Main]] / [[:Category:Items|Items]] / [[:Category:Gifts|Gifts]] / '''{{PAGENAME}}'''
 ''A package of fireworks.''

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 == Usage ==
-Drop the fireworks on the ground, '''[[activate]]''' a [[steel and flint]], '''right-click''' the fireworks and select '''Use'''.
+Drop the fireworks on the ground, '''[[activate]]''' a [[steel and flint]], '''right-click''' the fireworks, and select '''Use'''.
-* The number of shots depend on the [[quality]], each quality is one shot.
+* The number of shots depends on the [[quality]]. Each one quality provides for one shot.
-* Be sure to stand back looking straight up to see the effects.
+* Be sure to stand back looking straight up to see the effects in their entirety. The effects can be seen from quite a distance, even for some distance outside of [[Local|local range]].
 == History ==
 *Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players by [[Santa Claus]] as a Christmas gift in 2010.
-*They were also given on 13 December 2013 as part of the loyalty program for subscribing to premium consecutively.
+*They were also given on December 13, 2013 as part of the loyalty program for subscribing to premium consecutively.
 *Most recently, they were given as one of numerous possible Wurm 12th anniversary gifts to premium players on June 5, 2018. Three special gift box fragments had to be archaeologically found and combined to make the fireworks.

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 *Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players by [[Santa Claus]] as a Christmas gift in 2010.
 *They were also given on 13 December 2013 as part of the loyalty program for subscribing to premium consecutively.
-*Most recently, they were given as a Wurm 12th anniversary gift to premium players on June 5, 2018. Three special gift box fragments had to be archaeologically found and combined to make the fireworks.
+*Most recently, they were given as one of numerous possible Wurm 12th anniversary gifts to premium players on June 5, 2018. Three special gift box fragments had to be archaeologically found and combined to make the fireworks.
 [[Category:Items]]
 [[Category:Gifts]]
 [[Category:Babel/F]]

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 *Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players by [[Santa Claus]] as a Christmas gift in 2010.
 *They were also given on 13 December 2013 as part of the loyalty program for subscribing to premium consecutively.
-*Mot recently, they were given as a Wurm 12th anniversary gift to premium players on June 5, 2018. Three special gift box fragments had to be archeologically found and combined to make the fireworks.
+*Most recently, they were given as a Wurm 12th anniversary gift to premium players on June 5, 2018. Three special gift box fragments had to be archaeologically found and combined to make the fireworks.
 [[Category:Items]]
 [[Category:Gifts]]
 [[Category:Babel/F]]

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 == History ==
-Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players by [[Santa Claus]] as a Christmas gift in 2010. They were also given on 13 December 2013 as part of the loyalty program for subscribing to premium consecutively.
+*Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players by [[Santa Claus]] as a Christmas gift in 2010.
 [[Category:Items]]
 [[Category:Gifts]]
 [[Category:Babel/F]]

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-|result=* '''{{PAGENAME}}''' (4.00kg)
+|result=* '''{{PAGENAME}}''' (4.00 kg)
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 An explosive display of light and sound.
 == Usage ==
-Drop the fireworks on the ground, '''activate''' a [[steel and flint]] and '''right-click''' the fireworks and select '''Use'''.
+Drop the fireworks on the ground, '''[[activate]]''' a [[steel and flint]], '''right-click''' the fireworks and select '''Use'''.
-* The number of shots depend on the quality, each quality is one shot.
+* The number of shots depend on the [[quality]], each quality is one shot.
 * Be sure to stand back looking straight up to see the effects.
-* The effects can be seen from quite a distance, at least outside of local.
+* The effects can be seen from quite a distance, at least outside of [[Local]].
 == History ==
-Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players as a Christmas gift in 2010. They were also given on 13 December 2013 as part of Loyalty Program.
+Fireworks were given to [[premium]] players by [[Santa Claus]] as a Christmas gift in 2010. They were also given on 13 December 2013 as part of the loyalty program for subscribing to premium consecutively.
 [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kpL0ZuEgEFc Firing the fireworks video]

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