User:Echossaise - Revision history

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 Many moons have passed since.
-Echossaise is known today is a Condottiero of the "[[The Elythria Company]]" with a retinue of five faithful men-at-arms, in service of his adopted lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his god [[Fo]].
+Echossaise is known today is a Condottiero of the "The Elythria Company" with a retinue of five faithful men-at-arms, in service of his adopted lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his god [[Fo]].
 Presently, Echossaise is engaged in ''Condotta a soldo disteso'' to the insurgent kingdom of [[Lómaner]].
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 Hailing from [[Hammerfell]], Silvermount Municipality, Elythria Woods, Echossaise came into being during the final quarter of 2006.
-Tracing his roots to his humble origins from his native woodlands, Echossaise was mentored by the surrounding nature which the benevolence of [[Fo]] manifests. For many Wurmian years Echossaise remained in tutelage of what nature offered. He has since mastered varied arts of survival, tracking, climbing and has achieved deadly proficiency of the bow. Upon dedicating his life to defending his diety's domain, Echossaise departed his homeland for the Citadel of Hammerfell to further realise his potential.
+Tracing his roots to the humble origins from his native woodlands, Echossaise was mentored by the surrounding nature which the benevolence of [[Fo]] manifests. For many Wurmian years Echossaise remained in tutelage of what nature offered. He has since mastered varied arts of survival, tracking, climbing and has achieved deadly proficiency of the bow. Upon dedicating his life to defending his diety's domain, Echossaise departed his homeland for the Citadel of Hammerfell to further realise his potential.
-Many moons has passed since.
+Many moons have passed since.
 Echossaise is known today is a Condottiero of the "[[The Elythria Company]]" with a retinue of five faithful men-at-arms, in service of his adopted lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his god [[Fo]].

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 Many moons has passed since.
-Echossaise as we know today is a Condottiero of the "[[The Elythria Company]]" with a five faithful retinue men-at-arms, in  service of his adopted lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his God [[Fo]].
+Echossaise is known today is a Condottiero of the "[[The Elythria Company]]" with a retinue of five faithful men-at-arms, in service of his adopted lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his god [[Fo]].
-Presently, Echossaise is engaged in ''Condotta a soldo disteso'' to the insurgent Kingdom of [[Lómaner]].
+Presently, Echossaise is engaged in ''Condotta a soldo disteso'' to the insurgent kingdom of [[Lómaner]].
 http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5382/agincourtarcherstobemodyk3.jpg

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 Hailing from [[Hammerfell]], Silvermount Municipality, Elythria Woods. Echossaise came into being during the final quarter of 2006.
-Tracing his roots to his humble origins from his native woodlands, Echossaise was mentored by the surrounding nature which the benevolence of [[Fo]] manifests. For many Wurmian years Echossaise remained in tutelage of what nature offered, he has since then mastered varied arts of survival, tracking, climbing and has achieved deadly profieciecy of the bow. Upon a dedication to a life to defending his diety's domain, Echossaise departed his homeland for the Citadel of Hammerfell to further realise his potential.
+Tracing his roots to his humble origins from his native woodlands, Echossaise was mentored by the surrounding nature which the benevolence of [[Fo]] manifests. For many Wurmian years Echossaise remained in tutelage of what nature offered. He has since then mastered varied arts of survival, tracking, climbing and has achieved deadly proficiency of the bow. Upon dedicating his life to defending his diety's domain, Echossaise departed his homeland for the Citadel of Hammerfell to further realise his potential.
 Many moons has passed since.

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 Many moons has passed since.
-Echossaise as we know today is a Condottiero of the "[[The Elythria Company]]" with 5 retinue men-at-arms in faithful service of his native lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his God [[Fo]].
+Echossaise as we know today is a Condottiero of the "[[The Elythria Company]]" with 5 retinue men-at-arms in faithful service of his adopted lands of [[Hammerfell]] and his God [[Fo]].
-Presently, Echossaise engaged in ''Condotta a soldo disteso'' to the insurgent Kingdom [[Lómaner]].
+Presently, Echossaise engaged in ''Condotta a soldo disteso'' to the insurgent Kingdom of [[Lómaner]].
 http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5382/agincourtarcherstobemodyk3.jpg