Made a few edits to your rewrite Klaa, added in some more info about some events and clarified some things. Parts of your introduction didn't make sense to me, perhaps it could be worded better. ;) [[User:Jbobj|Jbobj]] 15:43, 24 September 2007 (CDT)
Eh feel free. Initially my goal was to redo some of the sentence structure; however, reading it felt a bit dry so started to have some fun with it.
Not sure the Nexus-central map info is pertinent though --[[User:Klaa|Klaa]] 17:10, 24 September 2007 (CDT)