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16:03, 26 April 2007 I Like this story but it's very generic at the moment... i think i could make something better of it by fleshing it out, without really changing what happened... does anyone mind or does someone have a stake in keeping their words as they are? If i flesh out the story should iresist the urge to take it further than it is?--[[User:Karmien Hearthflame|Karmien Hearthflame]] 10:03, 26 April 2007 (CDT)